You are thanking only sons, but excluding a daughter from a title. Ok, you write about her and that is nice, but it would be nicer to see a female child mentioned, or "Thank you, my children".
Children do not choose their place of birth, because if they could many children would choose to be born in free countries without war, oppression, religious extremism, and gender segregation.
Otherwise congratulations on the big family.
Gabriel is one of the greatest archangels but not my favorite.
To destroy Gomorrah must have required an exceptionally strong stomach.