Hey there, nearly half of your post is taken from the internet. You did not quote the source and this gives people the impression you wrote it yourself. This is called plagiarism and could be downvoted on Hive. I assume this is a newbie error, and I hope you will not repeat the same mistake again. Your onboarder should have made this very clear to you when you joined Hive, please go back to him if you are still unclear. Alternatively please seek guidance from the Hive PH community on Discord. You can learn a lot from them.
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I'm sorry I just did not put the source of the historical info yet I just quoted the historical source, I will improve it next time ma'am, I just don't want to get wrong on the information that I will give to the readers, I also tried to paraphrase and check on the plagiarism checker ma'am, but Aside from the historical details sir those words are mine.