Surrounded by the many who swore,
only to all die broken alone.
The last two lines end your poem in a sublime way. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Surrounded by the many who swore,
only to all die broken alone.
The last two lines end your poem in a sublime way. Thank you for sharing it with us!
Cheers. Not my forte, but I still don't know what is!
One thing is certain, your continuous drive in finding your forte will put you in continuously in a better place (inside and outside of yourself)!
Thank you for being such a example!