I like your transition form darkness to light. As you emerge from a state of inertia you reclaim your identity and potential you rise with confidence and strength. Well, that's how I read it. Interesting form, very modern.
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A good read, thank you. As far as form goes, I see it as free verse and minimalist. I typically find 'the law of my own poems', as Whitman put it.