joy bubbling/erupting to the surface/
girlfriends wildly free/
she sets her sights ambitiously high/
shuns the slums/ becomes/
a mother at 16/ a home owner/
a full time worker/
she turns heads/ her laugh infects/
she is chased/ and in turn chases/
with great happiness/
comes great loss/
the battle for a child/
leaves a bitter taste/
foreign skies beckon/
living life from where sun/
kisses desert blooms/
to jungles that whisper of life/ yes/
but also of doom.
Harm lingers/
meaning no good/
her heart once so vibrant/
now deep in despair/
beaten by darkness/ no fight to survive/
pain like daggers/ diminishes drive/
once effervescent/ now haunted by scars/
in pills found her solace.
I’m left with a sketch.
I ask myself/
how can I capture this grief/
this heartache/ the tears/ the ink/
which spills from my heart/
each time I think/
of my mother who swam in the Thames once/
whose silence now fills every space.
I love your punctuation and use of grammar it creates an amazing rhythm.
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