You sure can write a love poem! Holy cow, I love how you mix words up and somehow a clear meaning takes shape. This is really beautiful. I love how it resolves in such a simple, evocative statement. I love this.
You sure can write a love poem! Holy cow, I love how you mix words up and somehow a clear meaning takes shape. This is really beautiful. I love how it resolves in such a simple, evocative statement. I love this.
Thank you, @owasco. I'm always happy when you read one of my stories or poems. I haven't quite worked out what I'm doing with the broken syntax. Here it works because it reflects who Katt was, to an extent. But I've played with it in several poems now. I think, maybe, it's an attempt to break away from logic and just get at the feeling. Thanks again for reading. :)
It works beautifully for me. I don't know what happened, but I do know a feeling very well. You pack a lot into a very few words. You write poems (and stories) that leave me with time to think about them.