I might be a bit late but I would still love it if yall would maybe read my poem
Trapped in her mind
Her thoughts running over and over again
Like a broken record
But still not giving up without a fight
It's hard for her to handle I think
Because to her nothing is in order
So she'll stay angry and sad all the time
No way to find a smile in everyday
Because in her mind she lost everything
Even thou she has all she ever wanted
Everything together
To say one thing and mean another
Form new to old
She know but can she do much about that
Only for a second
She remembers
the good not the bad
The it takes a turn yet again
Emotions all over the place
Frustrated not being able to do as you please
Nothing is the same I'll say
But you don't always know
Whats the right thing to say
But the I remember I'm lucky to still have you here with us today
The picture is a screenshot from Pinterest
There are times when humans get like this. It looks like one has got it all under control but little bits keep falling apart. In times like this, it's best to take a break.
This was an expressive piece ✨
Ig yep people get older and some get sick
Very nice poem, the mind is powerful, we must try not to be dominated by thoughts, just take a breath and move forward, thanks for this piece ♥
Thank you for the atvice I'll try that🙂
We are prisoners of our feelings and emotions, kidnapped we are before a tangle of abrupt existences, that tame and subdue us, not for long just for a moment of life.
Thanks for sharing Your beautiful poem.
Good day.
Exactly and It must be more difficult for old people trying to figure out and having to deal with that over and over again but thanks for comming
Your poem is beautifully written! A reminder of how it is importance of holding onto positive memories and experiences in the face of adversity. Very relatable! 😊
Thank you thats true
Somthimes it's kinda hard but we try and hold on to the good
Oh and thank you
The feeling of inner contradiction is very well expressed in your poetic text, with eloquent images. Greetings, @lynn2005.
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