I search for light sparkles inside of the water. Instead, you lit me up like a fire, underneath the blood moon,
in the darkness.
I forget about the small sparkles. Left, waiting, for a sign, maybe validation. Who is going to keep this fire burning?
I’m falling deeper and deeper, burning myself each time, my mind drifts off. Longing for those brief moments of unrealness spend with you.
Its amazing how sometimes the less said the more the story told... It allowed me to rendition my own movie in my mind, thank you for sharing
Love to hear that, even though this poem has an orignal story (my story) each person can relate and create their own 😍
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Very nice writing I loved it, I can relate to this a lot, when you think yes but in the end no and well you just have to move on and move on. Thank you for sharing.
Happy to hear that, thank you for reading 😌
I can relate to this feeling.. Most of us tend to find ourselves falling deeper and deeper and at the same time burning within..
Thanks so much for reminding us of these words
Thank you for reading my poem, happy to see how each person connects to it 😊
We actually tend to connect to poems in our own different ways. I really loved your poem.. Don't stop writing
"Who is going to keep this fire burning?" i love this poem, but especially this line because no one these days realize love or even passion takes work >~< great job :D
Thank you (: and yesss it does take effort from both sides
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