With the heart in the guitar.
I met her in my adolescence
at a happy celebration party
of high school classmates,
and I was there with my guitar
that I didn't play very well,
but I played it with a lot of grace.
It was just the two of us
in the lobby of the spacious house,
and I dedicated to her a couple of songs
which she applauded with big bliss,
and as a reward for having pleased her,
we closed our eyes, and I received a kiss.
My heart turned to inspired fingers
and we became still again
because the other attendants returned
because they were sheltering from the rain.
Today I have remembered this beautiful experience
and I would like to turn back time
to put my heart again
in those six bodies with soulful sounds
and not to feel the irruption of the rain.
You're making me want to pick up a guitar and serenade someone special, Only problem is I never touched a guitar :))
According to data I have gathered as a folklorist, Luis Mariano Rivera, a great Venezuelan composer, started playing cuatro at the age of 48! He is an example of dedication and perseverance.
This is an amazing piece of poetry lecumberre ✨. The nostalgia of youthful love and expression of feelings.
Thank you, Wongi. Yes,he nostalgia is very sweet sometimes. Beautiful and nice girl. How will she be now?
Let's hope she is still the beautiful and nice girl she always was.
Thanks for sharing ✨!LUV
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Que bonito poema profesor! Me gustó y me divirtió mucho leer cada estrofa. Saludos! @lecumberre
Una experiencia personal allá en años tiernos de mi vida. La recuerdo con sum claridad, y nunc más he vuelto a verla.
Ah 😳 de verdad, pues aún más valiosa entonces este hermoso poema. Dicen que recordar es volver a vivir, así que está usted volviendo a vivir con cada recuerdo de su pasado que es oro. Saludos! @lecumberre
A veces nos ponemos nostalgicos y así la poesía se aprovecha para hacerse presente. Saludos amigo @lecumberre
Just close your eyes and go back there. Live the moment as it is just happening now :)
Damn… maybe I need to pick up the guitar :) Silly rain!
Nice lines, and a memory worthy of returning to.
Dear colleague, the poem is a beautiful recollection of a special moment in the speaker's life, when he met a girl at a joyous celebration with his classmates. The poem evokes a sense of nostalgia as he reflects on what might have been. The musical imagery adds emotional depth to the poem, and the last line gives a reflective twist to the narrative. Overall, the poem is exquisite in musicality and has an evocative quality that leaves the reader thinking about the power of human connections.
Best regards, my friend.🎸
Dear Jakim, thank u. The inspiration makes miracles in poetry.