Liza Summer
not knowing what went wrong
Mico said it's over
he stormed out the door.
no one knew she suffered much
She smiles and laughs
dying deep inside.
and there wasn't any closure
'til she married another
he remained a bachelor.
confessed he couldn't move on
chose to remain single
his heart only for her.
but none of them did something
Could be pride or was it shame?
Neither she has an answer.
or was it?
Waited for him
a few more years,
but didn't hear
a single word.
over 20 years hath passed
yet memories remind her
of a young love not forgotten.
him coming for her
and she being happy
as they walked together.
tears on her eyes
What could this be?
Confused, she just laughed.
'Tis to say I'm sorry
for things undone
and words unsaid too.
but now as a friend
I wish you well
'Til we meet again...
I kind of believe that some feelings are better left unsaid yet discovered that writing them is a form of release. This is just one of them and do bear with me for it's an amateur poem which for some reason, just came out as I stared at the provided photo, lol! Well, it's funny that the words came out quite naturally, just like narrating a story that I've read elsewhere.😅 Tried a lil polishing on some of the phrases but still feels something is lacking.
Regret. Have something you feel remorseful about and have bottled deep within for so long? I invite you to let the words flow and join us on this prompt. It could be a fun practice.😉Anyhow, this is my entry to this week's #PhotoPrompt for the topic
All the best and happy weekend!
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I like rhyming words sometimes and I find it amusing once I completed one.. Yours is more professional..hehe.. Nice poem !LADY
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It can be fun to do :) This is an amateur one sis hehe. I read others and they are really good. Thank you.
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You did really well. I have never tried poetry, and probably never will.
I used to believe this too. But recently discovered, while blogging about some of my feelings and thoughts, that writing is a form of release like you said.
Thank you, Joe. Thanks to Hive for allowing us to write our thoughts and share our feelings.
That is for sure. It has helped me a great deal lately.
And I believe it will do so over the years :) It's a haven for most of us.
And you Polish these phrases very well 😍 have a happy Sunday farm girl 🥰
Many thanks for your kindest words, Lesly. I appreciate you and wish you a lovely weekend.
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You are always welcoming dear 💫
You give rhyming words a whole new meaning, with character and emotions alongside. I absolutely !LUV this poem. You tell a beautiful story that we can relate to. Tastefully written @ifarmgirl 🤗
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Aww, thank you lots, Tessa. You are so kind :)
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Ah, the silliness of love. If we are meant to be together, we'd apologise and move on, work it out, be in love. Love shouldn't be hard! A lovely poem that captures the feeligs of regret really well.
Yes, that's the word "silliness" haha!
Thank you :) It was a good exercise.
I love how you're experimenting with poetry!
Mico..I like the name.
They always say that we should live a life without regrets but just like you said, some words are better left unsaid.
This was a nice piece of poetry ifarmgirl. You're making great progress with your poems✨
This is true. Life has a lot of challenges so adding regrets into the mix isn't exactly good.
Thank you lots, !LADY for your heartwarming remarks :)
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The pleasure is all mine.
Have a splendid Sunday ✨
I believe that writing is one of the best ways that we can ever express ourselves...
Nice post!
True that, !LADY. Glad we have Hive as a channel to do that :)
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Impressive poetry.
I liked it very much. And reading this it not giving me feeling like you are amateurs in case of poetry.
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Thank you lots, you're so kind :) I'm still learning😊
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Nice presence of the nostalgia. Think it was shame, not pride.
Thank you and that's good to hear, coming from you :)
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Ano kaya reason ng break-up? Hehe
Haha, d ko rin alam :D
Great piece here
Actions undone
Words unsaid
Now what's left is history
Yes, it's just memory now :)
Thank you and sorry. I only saw this now.