Who should I ask for help for my very own depression,
When everyone is putting a fake smile as a first impression.
People know everything, they know you are broken,
But still they expect that your scars should not be open.
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They expect you to be good,
They expect you to celebrate your life, Holding a glass of red wine.
When they know with you, nothing is fine.
Holding the empty glass under the dark old ceiling,
Don't know how to escape this negative feelings.
The sound of the ceiling fan is rattling,
The thought of killing myself is always captivating.
The smell of vinegar and alcohol runs through my veins,
Never knew how this beautiful body had turned into a devastated pain.
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It's important to know that killing yourself for someone is never worth it.
"Worth" is all about living your life and proving yourself.
If you still find yourself devastated in suicidal thoughts,
Hold on and be strong
You have some negative minds to prove wrong.
Fabulously you have penned down the emotions so naturally that it didn't feel too complex. Simply true facts, true circumstances, and relatively true emotions. I truly admire this poem, so simple words you have chosen and it syncs just too well.
Am glad you do understand every bit of the poem. I expressed my feelings in the simplest way possible so that anyone who reads this will understand the reason behind the poem. Thanks for your kind words..
Me gusto mucho este post, sobretodo a las personas que están pasando por esta horrible situación, es algo que los invade y no ven la forma de como escapar de ella, sólo están a la dulce espera de un milagro que los saque completamente de esa mala decisión.
Writing a poem about depression isn't always easy as the writing can be a potential trigger or demotivating to certain individuals.
But this one, all I could say is I can feel the emotions in the poem to not giving up and keep fighting. Very well written indeed.
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