This is beautiful. I love the formatting and the cadence. It sweeps the reader right through the poem and adds intrigue upon intrigue along the way.
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This is beautiful. I love the formatting and the cadence. It sweeps the reader right through the poem and adds intrigue upon intrigue along the way.
The issue of translation in English is always a concern for me. I hope I have not lost the sense of what I wanted to express.
I am glad you liked this poetic exercise. 🤗
Things will always get lost or changed in translation, but the English version, even if it differs from the original, is very powerful.
what a relief hahaha