I really liked your poem, the strength of the metaphors (your hopes are cold ash/ in my head), the dialogic dimension at the beginning of the poem. Just out of curiosity, why do you separate the lines with / instead of line breaks?
I really liked your poem, the strength of the metaphors (your hopes are cold ash/ in my head), the dialogic dimension at the beginning of the poem. Just out of curiosity, why do you separate the lines with / instead of line breaks?
Because I wanted it to be a prose poem, at the same time, I wanted the reader to be able to identify possible line breaks. Thanks for reading