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RE: BETRAYED : A Short-Fictional Story Written By Okweri-Eric Odomero Golden

in Freewriters4 years ago

You're very Talented i like your writing. Your teacher us doing such a great job.

The plot twist was impressive, albeit it was almost premeditated from the start like most Nigeria films 😂, but you still retain the suspense, so well done.

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Thank you so much, it wasn't easy to hold on to the suspense, but I am happy I could come up with something, I agree with you, my teacher is the best, he takes is time to monitor us and try to identify what we are good at and help us develop. Even though I am a science student, I'm super happy I'm finally allowing my writing take form. Thanks for taking out time to read. You rock.