The Rabbit Siren

in Freewriters4 years ago

He didn't start off hating the rabbits. When Amy was two years old, she loved to toddle after them, her fat knees wobbling and her ragdoll Bunster falling flaccid from her chubby fingers. He remembered her squeal like a siren, starting off as a gurgle then becoming ear piercing. Anyone would think she was some special anti bunny device bought at the hardware in town, or that perhaps she'd stood on a thorn. They would laugh together and count the rabbits. One, nine, three, eleven.


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When Amy stuffed her clothes into a backpack and left for India, the rabbits multiplied. The tumble down house at the end of the lane was a becoming a haven of sorts for oryctolagus cunicululus. Having forgotten to return, or perhaps becoming one of any number of woman met by foul play in foreign lands, the lawn became like a no man's land of craters and furrows, because there was no siren to warn them away.

The beasts would look at him with a fluff veiled accusatory glare, or else with pity, for not doing more to keep her home and safe. After all, she was always theirs, despite the siren. She had one tattooed on the inside of her wrist to remind her of home. Perhaps they had all come to see why he didn't go after her. He agreed with them that it was odd that she didn't even send postcards. At times he would argue with them about whose fault it was she left. They argued it was his, for shooting the rabbits. He argued it was theirs, for being there in the first place.

Hurling his boot or once, an Amazon parcel wrongly delivered to his address, he would inevitably miss, send the rabbits scurrying into the pines, only to reappear, with typically twitching noses and those accusatory glares.

If only he had Amy's siren, he thought, and fell asleep dreaming of her little squeal and pies stuffed with rabbit meat and mushrooms.

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This is in response to the Monday freewrite. It's been a while since I've written, and what better way than to do it with a Hive freewrite? How a 'siren' prompt turned into a story of loss and rabbits, I do not know. Fun fact: my acreage was once part of a large estate whose owner was responsible for letting loose rabbits into Australia. I can see one on my front garden as I write. Pesky bastards.

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I really enjoyed reading this. It was so detailed and vivid in its imagery. Great story telling - I could almost see the story taking place within my imagination as I read your words.

Thanks so much - I really appreciate you stopping by! It's funny how a story can come to life just with your brain moving from one image to the next until it takes form.

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Yes....once you get the images and allow your imagination to turn the page, it becomes fluid.

Thank you!

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This is a beautiful piece of writing, @riverflows. It is rich with beautiful imagery and language and feels more full than would seem possible for so few words. Please write more fiction. You have a gift with storytelling.

They are indeed pesky bastards. But so cute.

Oh @jayna what a compliment! This makes me feel all gooey on the inside. Thanks so much! You certainly make me WANT to write more, and I've enjoyed using the freewrite proompts to kick start me into doing it. I like the 5 minute fictions - I do go and edit and clean up of course, but I think our attention span on HIVE is short, so short fictions seem to be much more digestible. Thankyou again. You have made my day.

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Oh yes, I agree. People are much more likely to read a post if they know the can do so in just a few minutes. I wish it were not so, but it is. And certainly people still read books and longer things. It's all about the right content for the right medium. :-)

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This is AMAZING ... who would have thought those two concepts could go together like that!

Aw shucks. As soon as I had the little girl, I had the siren squeals! Hopefully a little different to what was expected...

I can't say I've read every response to the prompt, but I'm SURE there is nothing quite like yours!

Wonderfully written @riverflows. Was an enjoyable little read. Hope you're taking care of yourself and staying healthy. :)

Thanks @mudcat36! yes, all good here. We are just entering a 5 day lockdown because we had 13 whole cases, but aside from that I'm happy!

Good choice to include the info that rabbits are non-native to Australia. It helped me understand the context of your story, suggesting that in Australia these are out of control pests which a farmer would shoot simply to control the population. Not the case, as far as I know, anywhere in the U.S. It isn't necessary to understand or appreciate the story, but it completes it to have that background.

Ah, I didn't realise that! Yes they are utter pests here, so an Aussie context is probably useful!