Hey, Cat. First off, I'm sorry for not reading this story earlier than this. I wanted to be in the right frame of mind, and I'm glad I waited.
You know, Jhymi, I find it a little difficult to read stories written in the second person point of view. I started reading the story and got to the second paragraph and got lost. So, I settled and started again. Then, everything clicked. I know I say this every time, but I'm gonna say it again - you are amazing, Jhymi.
Villains are not born, they are made. Next time you write, help me give Matt two small knocks.
P.S.: This story is a little bit tragic o, but I'm glad it ended on a happy note.
It's alright, Kitten. I'm also trying to perfect my second person point of view style of writing. I do hope I can land it soon enough and then I'll be able to produce a masterpiece you'd love.
I know this is somewhat tragic but I like to think I'm getting back the hang of happy stories. I hope the next one is something to smile about all through. And yeah, Matt is getting a little more than knocks, that's for sure.
You forgot to add this,🌹, but it's alright. I've added it for you.
I have never tried it.
Oh! Sorry, Cat.🌹