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RE: THE 12YEAR OLD ME

in Freewriters • 3 years ago

I really like this. Despite the short word count, there is a lot of emotion and drama that occurs. I was sad for the speaker (I don't assume it is autobiographical), but also curious about why he didn't have celebrations for his birthdays before 12. Then, I was happy he had one, but wondered why he had to hide cake for himself. So, that is what I mean by emotion and drama. And suspense.

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     3 years ago  

    Thanks soo much for the nice words.
    Had to hide some for myself for the next day because the cake was soo good.

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