Freewrite - Awesome!

in Freewriters3 years ago (edited)

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Entry for mariannewest's COOL BEANS freewrite contest


Awesome!

"Awesome!", a little dude said as he ran by. Promptly stopped by his father, he raised his head, as the grown up asked him "what is that?"

— What is what?

— Awesum...

— Awesome?

— Yes, what is that?

— Uhmmm. It's when something nice happens.

— Something nice? What nice thing happened?

— My friend got permission from his mom to come over.

— Is that called awesome?

— No... It's like... When anything nice happens. It's awesome.

— Oh, you mean cool beans.

— What? No. Awesome!

— But that's cool beans.

— No, it isn't. Beans are food.

— But cool beans is when something nice happens.

— No, that's awesome. Beans are food.

— You know what? Go tell your mom your friend is coming. She might have a piece of cake waiting for you.

— Really?

— But... She'll only give you if you ask her to make cool beans for dinner. That's the secret.

— Wait, before I get my cake, I need to ask her to make beans?

— Cool beans. Yes, that's all, then you get cake.

— Awesome!

The little dude ran off to have a cringe-worthy conversation with his mother.


NOTE: Despite adding maybe 30 seconds or so, I take the five-minute rule very seriously. Fitting a creative, but coherent story in such a short amount of time is very challenging. Here's my method: I read the prompt, set up a 5-min alarm, think of a small idea just to get started, start the alarm then make stuff up as I go. The result is often intriguing to myself, so I find this contest very pleasing!

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Thank you very much for sharing such an awesome story with us @felipejoys, and even more impressive that you wrote it in 5 minutes, it's awesome.



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Thanks! I really enjoy participating in her freewrite contest.

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Gostei tanto que vou fazer um puxadinho kkkk

  • Mamãe, mamãe faz feijão fresco!?
  • Feijão fresco? Fresco é o ar, feijão é grão...
  • Então faz grãos de feijão fresco mamãe que vou esperar
  • Esperar? Risos
  • Sim vou esperar o bolo mamãe, que só ganha quando você faz feijão fresco
  • Mas que história é essa?
  • Papai falou que feijão é incrível e ganha bolo
  • Ah esse teu pai! Mas feijão é comida e isso tudo é incrível e se você não for lavar as mãos não vai ver nem farelo.
  • Farelo?!
  • Do bolo menino! Tão novo e tão esquecido hahaha

Não marquei tempo só escrevi kkkk
Ser tou later...

Papai falou que feijão é incrível

kkk essa é boa


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