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RE: Day 1852: 5 Minute Freewrite: Thursday - Prompt: bright light

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He found himself in a place that looked like an office. In front of him was a thin, gray-haired man with glasses, dressed in an eighties-looking blue sweater. His general appearance was quite casual and relaxed.

Who are you and what am I doing here? - I ask with a lot of curiosity and wonder.

Welcome to what you would call "heaven", here it is known as "the perfect place", it turns out that you just died, and after evaluating everything you have done in your life, you have been sent to this place. I'm Ramirez, the one who runs the site, but you can call me Jaime, that way we can build more trust.

I look at him in amazement for a few seconds and after accepting this new reality I ask: Ok, but then how did I die? Because I don't remember anything, my memory is blank and I would like to know. he told her.

Are you sure you want to know? - asked.

And at that moment the sound of the alarm clock wake up him from his dream and he felt the bright light on his face, a sign that another boring morning was beginning on planet earth.


This has been my 5 minute post today, I hope you enjoyed it @mariannewest