Sometimes the darkness takes me; it starts at the edges, a creeping shadow, and blocks the light. No, it takes the light.
Felt like something from a movie but still it felt so real, I was standing right there when he left and I could feel all the emotion that was running through both of them.
She was indeed so strong, a soldier in her own way, taking stern orders in the battle field. Each battle she fought changed her in one way, made her stronger, made her a better fighter.
She's a fighter though, a warrior. She holds onto me fiercely, keeps me calm, soothes me and refuses to give up the fight. She calls those moments her deployments and fuck how she fights!
Loved the details, the way you ended each paradise to give life to the other, kept me glued, anticipating what'll happen next.
Glad I read through this story. Thanks for sharing
I'm glad you liked the piece, it was enjoyable to write, a nice two hours spent indeed. I am glad also that you picked out a couple parts that I also like a lot. Thanks for commenting.
Sure, it was worth it. The creating process takes more time, and then we just get to read it in few minutes. That's the beauty of creation. I'm glad you were able to create something this good.
Yeah, I'm glad we both liked those lines, they really drew me in.
Thanks again for replying