This is my entry for the weekly Zapfic Friday contest. The goal is to write as complete a story as possible with the given prompt in precisely 50 words. This week's prompt is "chocolate."
Confession: this one is actually a true story. Eep. I could subtitle it: "How I learned to be less greedy." Ha ha. You will see what I mean.
Oops... That is Not Chocolate.
I was only three years old. The plate of chocolate morsels was placed tantalizingly close.
I reached out and quickly popped one into my mouth only to have a horrible shock.
"Did she just eat a piece of raw liver?" my mother asked her friend as I began to cry.
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Now, that was brutal 🤣🤣
With this, someone learned to be less greedy for real 😅😅
@carys, this made me laugh really hard 😂🤣
Thank you. I certainly learned my lesson the hard way. No punishment necessary!
This would work well with the "shock" prompt too lol
What an unpleasant surprise!
True! And it was indeed unpleasant. Ha!
That is one of the most powerful and the funniest 50 word stories I've ever heard hahahahahahaha @carys!!!
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Hahaha, this is hilarious. How could you have thought that a liver is a chocolate? Yuck!
Well not yucky if it is cooked.
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Thank you. It is hard to believe, isn't it? I wanted to include a photo of raw, dark, chopped liver because if it is cubed and dark, you can see how it could look fudgey and melty and delicious to my naïve three year old self, but I couldn't find an open source photo to include.
If you look at stock photos of raw chopped liver, while some look nothing like chocolate, you can see a few that show how I could have been so utterly mistaken. https://www.istockphoto.com/search/2/image?phrase=chopped+liver
I can understand the scenario.
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Hahaha 😂😂, this is really hilarious.
Nice entry.
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Hahahahahahaha, so sorry about that. Didn't you spit it out immediately? I think next time it is good to smell it first before eating it. Hahaha
Ha ha. I am pretty sure I did spit it out. However, the damage was done. When you expect chocolate and get a mouth full of raw liver, that is not a mistake you make twice! It really should not even be a one time error.
Funny! And a bit tragic too.
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🤣🤣🤣This is the funniest thing I've read in a long time!!! Is it a true story?
Thank you. It is true. Sadly. Ha ha.
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The photo looks so yummy because I'm a chocolate fan. Thanks for sharing the story.
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The resemblance of the liver with chocolate 🙄🥴 this can't happen 😂 you can't become an April fool
Nice attempt
Well, it happened. I understand your skepticism, but some liver is very dark, and my mother'sfriend cubed it very nicely like chocolate!
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