5 minutes freewrite: pride and feelings

in Freewriters4 years ago

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My heart skips a beat everytime your name comes to mind

I still feel the butterflies in my belly when I think of you
Your laughter still echoes in my head

When I close my eyes
The image of you smiling and talking is all I can see

The smell of your cologne so alluring
I still sleep in your shirt at night
So I could be alitle close to you

Your shy smile and childish demeanor
The way you walk and feel nothing matters

How your eyes light up when I bring you a cup of coffee
But holds so much sadness when
You are unable to find your favorite pair of socks

I still feel your pain
And smile at those moments that made you happy

Everytime I walk by you
It's a constant conflict between my pride and feelings

Should I say or just walk away
But my pride always win

I guess our journey has come to an end
A heartbreaking end
You left but why didn't you take your memories with you

I will just have to love you from afar
And cherish the love in my heart

The memories of you
Hunt my day
And disturbs my sleep at night

Discovered it wasn't meant to be
But I can be in love with you and not stay with you
Should I call one last time?
Constant battle between my pride and feelings

~ayorae♥️~
Love you alll♥️♥️😊

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Wow that is such a tender story. I can just feel the love, the confusion, the battle between the head and the heart going on there.

That was so well written too. Great Job!

And sorry that you had to part with someone so dear to you....but that's life isn't it.

Thanks you @chocolatescorpi ♥️

I guesss we don't always end up with people we thought would be our forever 😣

But we can still cherish the love in our heart and move on😊

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Wow that was just an amazing and sad love story @ayorae, thanks a lot for sharing, it's awesome.



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Thank you @thisisawesome ♥️

Wow that was beautiful. I really felt the emotion in this & know a lot of us have been there before. Thank you for sharing this with us. You are appreciated & keep up your great work! Remember, You Are Awesome! 👍🙂💚



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