When I wrote this story, I honestly wasn't too impressed with my own writing. I don't write fiction often, but when I do, it usually comes from something that happened in my real life. I use fiction as a way to let go of negative emotions and turn them into something positive and creative. Specifically, there was a part where the character talks to his wife about smartphones, and I didn't think much of it at the time. But after reading your comment, I started to think about the relationship between the husband and wife in the story. Looking back at my old blog, I realized that my future self might appreciate it more. Maybe I was too focused on comparing my writing to other popular fiction and didn't appreciate the bond I portrayed between the characters.