I really appreciate you River!! ππ€
It's so cool that this partially hailed from a memory- I think it's a lot of fun to tap into trippy recollections when writing ahaha!
You know, I read this again with that pov, and found so many new layers (Like her pulling away from you trying to take her glasses off etc)... Goes to show that perspective when reading can change a whole lot- I suppose I just wanted her to love "you" back π Sap mode over here...
It was cool to learn a bit more about the influence for your scenes here! You rock π
Hahah - I don't think so, but I try to rock when I can :P I wondered if I didn't come across properly, but I'm glad that the second reading made you see what I intended. You know, that dorky stage when you're not quite confident enough in your sexuality but you are soooo obsessed with someone, but can't quite say it? I mean this girl was going to drink as much mushroom coffee as her wish-she-was lover wanted! xx