Love and Redemption || Original Poem

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Every time I see you,
The beats of my heart become melody.
Every time I hear you pronounce my name,
my skin is falling apart,
Piece to piece.

It is already stronger than me the desire to have you,
the yolks of my fingers melt,
of so much dreaming that you have you,
that I have,
That you are mine.

It is bigger your beauty than you think you have,
and it is much bigger the tenderness that is in you
Although you can not see it.

I love you...
but I will continue to shut up what I feel,
until it arrest
And go with the wind.

From the first time I saw your eyes knew that at the end everything will terminate badly.
How did she not go to hate you?

If they were each of your words to my chest as a puncture,
And in my soul a beginning of something that would not have an end.

I fell on your trap, so easily that now I am surprised by my ingenuity,
Defeated by a couple of kisses and some eventual caresses.
How was not I going to hate you?

If i battled with myself day by day not to give importance to what her heart told me.
In efforts because it always ends up doing what I wanted.
From the first time I saw your eyes knew that at the end everything will terminate badly.

You are a lost soul,
from another world.
You are here by accident,
trapped in this life,
during this time,

On this wall,
Chained a brush forever.
I stepped on the dry leaves that fell from you,
While the black ink ran through your fingers.

Ghosts of the past, There
My body lies on the threshold
as matter.
I fly,
I make immense jumps,
and my body is still there,
vain.

You, being you,
You are sitting
doubting the shadows,
Questioning ghosts
That break your courage.

You are by my side
and I know you think about it;
I sleep by your side
And I've already done it a thousand times.

I want you
how the rain wants the earth,
I make you mine
as the same pronoun that is mine,
I loose and fall into my body;
you run,
You run away from me,
Turning you to find
With the same ghosts of the past.

I'm a shadow,
trapped under the feet
of those who walk under the light of the moon
And the thoughts are lost.
I'm going back, always behind,
Without never seen,
because I prohibited to look up,
already got used to seeing,
from the day when the sun
It shone for the last time.

I am your martyrdom,
Because you know I'm there
And suffer for not being able to see you.

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It's nice seeing your poem again @vikbuddy

It is already stronger than me the desire to have you,
the yolks of my fingers melt
&
I'm a shadow,
trapped under the feet
of those who walk under the light of the moon

These lines are Poetic. They paint sense of imageries which are amusing to me...

Thanks for the appreciation friend. Have a good day 😊🙏 !PIZZA


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I want you
how the rain wants the earth,
I make you mine
as the same pronoun that is mine,
I loose and fall into my body;
you run,
You run away from me,
Turning you to find
With the same ghosts of the past.

Interesting piece you get going on here @vikbuddy, keep the fire burning.


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First of all I appreciate your thoughts you share so far,from the above poem it really sound so awesome and cute when two people are coming together to become one in relation and love.some part of the poem make me to remember my first love which she later left me to marry my enemy,so to cut the story short.is good for upcoming minded people with fear of the Lord to venture into most of the poem above,some might have such feeling while some is fake just get to the treasuer land and backup.
My advice for the new upcoming lover should be careful when pronouncing most of the poem above because there is power in the tongue,whatever we say from our innermost mind sometime it come to pass.thanks once again all the line of Poems are sweet and nice .


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This is really awesome, honestly speaking.

Ghosts of the past, There
My body lies on the threshold
as matter.
I want you
how the rain wants the earth,

These lines got me to doff my cap for you. excellent creativity here


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Thanks dear, i just love playing and being creative with words, sometimes I just go with flow 😊🙏
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That good of you!! We ar all meant to be creative and playful too,because life is worth to be above mentioned which is playful and creativity.


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Amazing piece. I've never really had the chance to enjoy peotry like that. This one captivated me.

Thank you


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I was ones told that, if you truly love someone sometimes, you gat to let them go. Love is not an easy thing, in love, you need to sacrifice a lot in order for your love story to be interesting and awesome, it contains alot of dramas and shows. You just need to take your time to make it worth it if it is truly it is what you want. I love this poem of yours. Keep it up man


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Interesting post,I always believe in love but what I don't understand is that I do hearing it from people perspective that there is know love but I strongly believe if you come across the write person you understand that love has no end.my advice is that don't love off.


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Wow! nice poem, it's really interesting, keep it up @vikbuddy


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Holy shit! This was so romantic, This is the definition of a love poem.
This poem made me go on a short imaginative delusion and I was just smiling excessively.


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