You are viewing a single comment's thread from:RE: The Scar, a Serenade View the full contextriverflows (80)in Proof of Brain • 4 years ago (edited)Love this, especially the last few lines...
thank you @riverflows !
I wrote two more verses for the end but left it out as I felt it was more powerful without...and I was wary of using too many metaphors..
Here are the final two verses that I ultimately excluded, perhaps you will like these:
Take me as I am
Damaged and lame
Take me as I am
Look up, I’m starting again
I'm a young bird, born anew
The one who is alive
I feel the freedom within, without
I'm flying through the skies