My first contest ... This is my Entrance to Storytelling Contest #2

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The Mzarx500 is a fierce ship with cutting edge technology. It's by far the fastest ship in the 98D sector, it has full plasma cannons, that can shoot in any direction, its design in slick and oppressive, making all other ships to look like children's toys. It's so incredible that all the raiders of the sector try to put their hand on it, but always fail due to the speed and fire power of this ship. Most people call it "Death Lighting" but Captain Sam call it "The Moth". And Sam can do that, after all, who is the owner of the ship? That's right, Sam is. Maybe that name is because of the stealth system of the ship, or maybe because it can fly in any direction, but no one dares to question the Captain. The small crew that travel with Sam are Mink, the crazy torak space engineer and Lativber, the human weapon specialist. No one is sure of what race Sam is, but again, no one dares to question the Captain. They get along very well, and have been in many trips together. You could say they are family already, just don't say it in front of the Captain. Something happened in the past with the Cap's family, but by now you probably know already what I'm going to say right?
It all started as it always does: Sam got a message to help some traders in the border of Guklen, really close to the Runit system. "Ok, another easy job for us" thought Sam, while setting the course in the ship main window. "Warp gate ready to deploy Cap!" screamed Mink below the deck. Sam was not a big fan of warp gates, but it was the only way to get to the destination in time to meet the traders. With a simple gesture in the air, the portal was open in front of the ship. A big golden purple ripple in space, bending the view in front of them. Lativber gripped tight to the chair, and in a blink of an eye they were gone. The jump is supposed to be fast and clean, but for some reason it was taking longer than usual. Sam decided to look the left to watch the ripples of energy that happens when you warp, but what the Captain saw was...

Regarding the origin and race of Captain San an old Sailor recited from the port of Zimp in the city of Urti of the Kerk system related an interesting story about a man whom he knew from his childhood in his hometown Urti.
This man whose story refers to a person who from his childhood showed great skills and intelligence with which he surpassed the rest of the children of his community.His father was a well-known designer of boats in the gunners of the port of the city. .

His mother was a woman very loved and respected by her community in the same way his two brothers Hest and Ryxt were, like him, very prominent in their community as the time passed when this almost adult child, something unexpected and tragic happened that prosperous and modern city It was invaded and devastated by enemy forces. The invading hosts were very powerful in numbers and weapons on behalf of The Invaders were the Hinter of the Ramitek system.
They took with them great spoils of war and many prisoners, including the parents and brothers of the man whose story refers to him.


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This man managed to cover up and went very far from the city he reached the Kirt system specifically to the city of Oxert.
It was a very hard and difficult time for him that is how it is arranged that one day he would find his family there in that city he became an expert navigator of the most modern ships of his time that was how he became famous and respected Captain Sam.

Man of War knew very well each system, each planet, each city, as well as the navigation technology as well as the most sophisticated weapons of the moment, it is thus in the midst of that great fascinating experience where he meets those who today make up his crew the old man refers to. Sailor to his friends Niño, Torak (the crazy space engineer) and Lativber, (specialist in human weapons)

Through time, effort and Esperanza, she manages to buy a powerful ship equipped with the best technology and Compaq capacity, it was the MZARX500, and she hired the aforementioned crew with whom she maintained strong ties of friendship, but all this achievement was not enough. that he successfully modified the MZARX500, and transformed it into the combat ship ever built and the most coveted by his adversaries the story told by the old Mariner is a little difficult to believe for many but Something extraordinary happened when he was Help the traders on the Guklen border, near the Runit system.

In what was supposed to be an easy job turned out to be more difficult than he imagined they were fiercely attacked as were the merchants or the forces of Hinter, of the Ramiter system.
The same ones that invaded and destroyed their city was an unlikely situation in which a formidable ship was being attacked from all four sides by a multiple force that had cornered Torak, his crazy space engineer tells him captain one of the main engines is damaged and our friend Mink is injured, the weapons specialist speaks on loudspeaker saying we must respond to the attack from the left flank and thus be able to move more freely and respond to the attack effectively. It was through this maneuver that they managed to fire their powerful plasma cannons, significantly reducing the enemy ships which fled into the Ramiter system refer, the MZARX500 followed the remaining ships to the city of Norh from the Ramiter system,

It was a battle between MZARX500 and the defense of the city after one hour of combat in the city he surrendered it was at that time between the person of that city observed some well-known people it was none other than his family his parents and his brothers who had Being a prisoner in his hometown was that happy meeting with his family better than a thousand spoils of war from that final setlist, many could verify that the story of That Old Sailor from the port of Zimp was more true than they thought ...


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I enjoyed your story, the way you created names and the history of your family seemed very creative. successes in the contest.


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Good to see you here, I see that the article was helpful, enjoy reading your story, and if you continue like this it will only be a matter of time for you to master the basics to fully enjoy the community. Greetings and success in the contest!


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Hello!

You have been chosen to enter the "Just Write" contest (more about the contest here). Results will be announced on Monday, May 17, 2021.

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Best of luck in the contest and keep writing like this!


Hola!

has sido elegido(a) para entrar en el concurso "Solo escribe" (más datos sobre el concurso aquí). Los resultados se darán el lunes 17 de Mayo del 2021.

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Mucha suerte en el concurso y continua escribiendo de esta manera!


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Hello, thank you very much for your words, and I am very pleased with the invitation to the contest, I will read the details and count on my participation.-


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Nice narrative skills, you've decided to go to combat with the MZARX500
Awesome!


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Hmm, it really was quite a twist that the battle led the Captain back to his family. Nice little happy ending 👍


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