A tirade of threnody brims
to the perimeter of this room
beside me is an artistic candle
beating with a swaggering light
this time, I try to redefine a SCAR
which reincarnated into silence
but my voice became a flightless feathered bird
This strange feeling reminds me
of grandmother's last words
before breaking the last bread with us
“a body that breaths its last
becomes a firewood in turn of ashes”
a day after, she sank deep into the earth
like water returns to its source
Sometimes we try to forge our scars
into a tender template of poem
which unfolds a diagrammatic symbolism
and picturesque metaphor —
and make them a fancy fable;
meanwhile we mean
the irony of the sound of laughter
in the veins of darkness
that smells of blood and sweat.
It's been a while I posted any of my Poems; though I have something that takes some of my energy and time — that's why I do squeeze myself to come here to post which I do occasionally with making of comments on different writings that I feel it's necessary. I do enjoy different sort of creativity writings here, trust me, and sometimes I do want to upvotes, but unfortunately, my upvote doesn't count at all — it worths nothing (it's just an addition of number). What I mostly do here is to come and relish creative writing. The truth is, I've been making some comments on some “Poetries” (and other writings). I feel this is the time for me to show mine 😃😃🙂. And the above poem is a recent one which I intended to put out here as promised.
#Pob Community which are really captivating. It's really amazing to see writers showcasing their talents with the instrumentality of different creative writing(s) with the sole aim of communicating their repressed feelings, emotions, ideas and experiences to the world.I've met some writers here too, such as @vikbuddy62, @josediccus @d-pend and others who love writing Poetry too, and I've read some of their poems in this
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This post is totally plagiarism free & all the photographs were shot & Edited by me @martinstomisin (28/08/2021)
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Nice work my friend 🤝 keep it up 👍🏾 @tipu curate
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Thanks a lot for the great comment, I really appreciate @kgakakillerg
And thanks for the liquid rewards, too
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It's my pleasure bro 🤝 I hope that you enjoy your weekend 👍🏾
Yes, I did. Thanks dear friend @kgakakillerg
I hope you did as well?
Good to hear 🤝 I had a great weekend 👊🏾
Glad to know that dear friend
Stay blessed always @kgakakillerg
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Nice poem and it's nice seeing you on this platform again that you are still on this path of writing poem since years in University days..... Keep the candle burning..... @martinstomisin
Thanks a lot dear friend..., I really appreciate seeing your wonderful comment here @teegold96
Yes, I'm still on this part by God's Grace
Will follow you soon, and hope to see more of your writings...Thanks once again dear, @teegold96
Stay blessed!
Good poetry..... You can keep on posting your poems here.... I enjoyed reading through it
Glad you enjoyed it!
And thanks a lot for your wonderful comment — I really appreciate
I hope to bring more on this platform for you to relish soon or later @deeptess
Stay blessed dear friend!😊
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This hits. Lovely poem. I'd love to see more of your photography too.
Glad you really love it, brother
Thanks a lot brother for your wonderful comment and upvotes @stevenson7
Hopefully you'd be notified everytime I post a new one.
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