I took time to read your piece line after line and it is very relatable.
The best way to get an artwork done right is to always have your artist's mindset
So people don't have that artist mindset. They just want to do something quickly and get on with their lives. The result of just trying to get by may not be very encouraging.
It applies to writing too. You probably write with a stiff neck and you are so pleased with your work but the masses don't think so.
We have to let it flow from within, without and around.