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RE: Sometimes You Can Go Home Again

Man... This is a thrilling and suspensful piece.

After reading the first 3 paragraph, I started wondering if this was a continuation of a story. Hehe. The last part of it cleared me on that.

Delilah though, what a character! She has the elegance of royalty. Her commanding dialogue with the guard says Alot about her.

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Yeah, her father is a Baron, and she is a brave young lady :) I hope you will join us in writing this 🙌

!PIZZA

Okay... The trait is visible in her. Heh

This is worth trying ✌️