This blew me...it is fantastic. I have been writing blogs and love reading all kinds of books. The initial draft was excellent and I just loved the final draft. Being one to the hive and now interested in writing short stories. I can't wait to read the complete story. You are an influential painter.
I'm glad you enjoyed the scene from the story, and the insight into the drafting process 👍🙂
And thanks for the follow. I shall follow you back and check out your blog.
P.s. If you're interested in writing short stories 'The Ink Well' community is a great place to learn and develop fiction writing skills 🙂 you can click the banner at the bottom of my post, or follow this link if you'd prefer:
https://peakd.com/c/hive-170798/created
Good luck 🍀