I'm glad you enjoyed the scene from the story, and the insight into the drafting process 👍🙂

And thanks for the follow. I shall follow you back and check out your blog.

P.s. If you're interested in writing short stories 'The Ink Well' community is a great place to learn and develop fiction writing skills 🙂 you can click the banner at the bottom of my post, or follow this link if you'd prefer:

https://peakd.com/c/hive-170798/created

Good luck 🍀