[ENG-ESP] Superfluous / Superfluo

in GEMS3 years ago (edited)

Buen día/tarde/noche a toda la comunidad de HIVE, éste es mi primer post en dicha comunidad y por ello no quisiera que fuera de presentación (al menos no aún). Espero que lo disfruten.

Good morning/afternoon/evening to the entire HIVE community, this is my first post in that community and therefore I don't want it to be a presentation (at least not yet). I hope you enjoy.

Superfluous / Superfluo

Noche etérea
Donde despiertan emociones a granel
No puedo respirar sin saber
Sin saber si podré seguir
Sin saber si podré vencer
Sin saber si algún día acabará

Ethereal night
Where they arouse emotions in bulk
I can't breathe without knowing
Not knowing if I can continue
Without knowing if I can win
Not knowing if one day it will end

Lo superfluo se apoderó del subconsciente
Y mi resilisencia es inherente
Para el resto de la gente
Siento indiferencia aún cuando capto todo
Porque puede que por mi experiencia
Desconozca si existe otro modo

The superfluous took over the subconscious
And my resilience is inherent
for the rest of the people
I feel indifference even when I grasp everything
Because maybe from my experience
Don't know if there is another way

Otro modo de ver las cosas
Otro estilo de vida mejor
En el que solo yo sea quien importe
En el que solo yo sea lo mejor

Another way of seeing things
Another better lifestyle
In which only I am the one who matters
In which only I am the best

Inclemente a veces soy conmigo
Por errores cometidos una vez en el pasado
Así como mis versos no llevan constancia
Así como antes también he tropezado

Inclement sometimes I am with myself
For mistakes made once in the past
Just as my verses have no record
Just as before I have also stumbled

Y estoy seguro de que seguiré haciéndolo
Pasarán inviernos y estaré en lo mismo
En proceso de auto crítica expulsando el egoísmo
Que siempre carcome demostrando su yoismo

And I'm sure I'll keep doing it
Winters will pass and I'll be in the same
In the process of self-criticism expelling selfishness
That always eats away demonstrating his yoism

Confieso que te extraño
Me digo a veces
Superfluo
Sobrante que perturba
Así son mis insomnios

I confess that I miss you
I tell myself sometimes
Superfluous
surplus that disturbs
This is how my insomnia is


Agradecido por su atención, espero que les haya gustado ésto y todo lo que tengo por escribir por éstos lares.

Grateful for your attention, I hope you liked this and everything I have to write around here.

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