Good effort for your entry.
I‘m not sure if you listened to the audio quality of your own entry but honestly the words I can hear are still muffled and the sound quality is really affected, your voice has a lot of feedback and you have a good rhythmic flow on this cover song but I would suggest turning down the instrumental and rapping much farther away from the microphone, or just use a new recording device from someone else entirely because the microphone you are using is not good at all and everything sounds fuzzy and distorted. I appreciate you sharing a hip hop song, if I were you I would totally rerecord the song and do it justice like I know you are capable of
And before reuploading it. You should ask for a second professional opinion from someone who will give you honest good criticism to help improve your entries. Best of skill to you. And thanks for sharing.

GospelMusician/Singer/Songwriter/Rapper/Beat Producer/Pianist/& An Official Vibes Judge

@Verbal-D & The Vibes Team