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RE: Platinum Frame (original composition) | Vibes Week 11 entry

in Vibes8 months ago (edited)

@fondew

This original song is straight fire
Leaving a trailblaze of temperatures higher
That outlines the marks of heartbreak
When we get tangled in emotions of relationships, in that we partake

Your voice both smooth and driven with raw emotion
Powerful moments, and relatable notions
Listeners wanting to scream and yell along with you
To express and release what they suppressed, their issues

This paved a path and an experience to the inner soul
To reminisce, step & drift, what we've wept & missed, bigger woes
Holding on to all the baggage, after being damaged & ravaged
Relationships, some toxic & savage, we need to let go, what we no longer can salvage...

-@Verbal-D Official Vibes Judge

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Wow Verbal, thank you so much. Truly appreciate such thorough feedback.