Hello to everyone of you guys. This is my entry on the week 23 on vibes. So I came across this track on Instagram and I fell in love with it instantly. Turns out to be one of the most trending songs on insta reels.
Up, by Connor Price is truly an exceptional song. I remember when I was stuck a certain time due to some personal issue I was going through and how I miraculously came out of it. There are some tracks that when I listen to them it sparks up something within me to write a verse on them. This song is one of them.
Here are the lyrics of my cover
I start de reason life when I finish highschool
Omo life really tough me i no go lie you, like dude
I was thinking what do I do
Had to double up my hustle like x2
Down really bad, devil held me captive
Stuck, everything around me was inactive
Then I heard a voice said as long as God lives
I can face tomorrow no matter what that guy brings
God is alive, so why I go stress
I can never desire any less
Even when I feel I'm worst of them all
He still tells me that I am the best
Yes, best I can ever be, yes
When he made me not a single defect
On a daily, man, I give him thanks
Many goals but his kingdom is what I seek first
Bro, what are you doing
Obsessing about the Gucci and Lui, for real
I've been there man, truthfully
Won't gain anything, you can take it from me
Time is running out, man you gotta seat up
Time is going tik tock, and e no go fit stop
You de form big boss, Omo no be wisdom
God is ringing that phone, better pick up
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That was a great entry bro well done you are a good raper so congratulations for that performance a hug
Good effort for your entry.
I‘m not sure if you listened to the audio quality of your own entry but honestly the words I can hear are still muffled and the sound quality is really affected, your voice has a lot of feedback and you have a good rhythmic flow on this cover song but I would suggest turning down the instrumental and rapping much farther away from the microphone, or just use a new recording device from someone else entirely because the microphone you are using is not good at all and everything sounds fuzzy and distorted. I appreciate you sharing a hip hop song, if I were you I would totally rerecord the song and do it justice like I know you are capable of
And before reuploading it. You should ask for a second professional opinion from someone who will give you honest good criticism to help improve your entries. Best of skill to you. And thanks for sharing.
GospelMusician/Singer/Songwriter/Rapper/Beat Producer/Pianist/& An Official Vibes Judge
@Verbal-D & The Vibes Team
I appreciate your honest opinion @verbal-d. Due to financial constraints that's why I am lacking in this area, but I'm making towards it. Thanks.