Hello everyone, my name is Shunzee and this is my entry for the VibeWeb3 Music competition Week 14.
I sang a cover of Mi Amor by Sam Feldt,and added my own lyrics
Let me know what you think
First Verse-
Yeah she's the only girl that I find my peace when I'm with oh
And she's a one in a million, that's why I put her in all of my songs yeah
Original Naija Boy!
If I no put all of my native sound on this one oh
Would you be my girl?
(Wuh Loor Wu loove)
[Pre-Chorus:]
You got me going like, "Oh, oh, oh"
Got me singing like, "Ya, ya, ya"
Yeah, I was feelin' real low
Till I found you
[Chorus]
'Cause I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for someone to love for the rest of my life
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
[Post-Chorus:]
Yeah, I've been looking for
Yеah, I've been looking for someone to lovе for the rest of my life
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for
Second Verse-
Night time is that time when I'm feeling you
That's right I'm not lying
Tell me the things that you want oh
Cause this love got me going so low
And I won't let anyone know
If Na low-key thing wey you want oh
[Pre-Chorus:]
You got me going like, "Oh, oh, oh"
Got me singing like, "Ya, ya, ya"
Yeah, I was feelin' real low
Till I found you
[Chorus]
'Cause I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for someone to love for the rest of my life
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
[Post-Chorus:]
Yeah, I've been looking for
Yеah, I've been looking for someone to lovе for the rest of my life
Yeah, I've been looking for mi a— mi a— mi a— mi amor
Yeah, I've been looking for
Let's connect:
Nice, your voice and vibes are top notch.
Keep up the good work brother.
Thank you so much boss
You're welcome sir
Confam
Omo I love your ingenuity putting this together in your own way
Bravo man
This is so nice and your vibes is vibing 🥰
Aww😊
Thank you so much 🥰
You’re welcome Shunzee, keep up the vibes man
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The beginning of your entry started off strong
But the loud backing track music ended up overpowering your vocals
Try turning it down and balancing it out next time
I like the creativity and originality you put into your own lyrics
And how you delivered it so coolly with style
The chorus, I felt could have been sang much stronger to match the energy you showed on the verses
and the energy of the music
My main suggestion and critique for you would be to perform it all live next time in future entries
You have some good potential to make some fun and great music
You can prerecord minor adlibs or so
But it's always better to perform live and do it in one take
It is possible and you can definitely do it
Keep practicing, sharing and performing
And continue having fun!
I would like to see you keep improving
Check out this guide I wrote to help you improve your future entries
https://hive.blog/hive-140169/@verbal-d/official-cut-off-time-post-for-vibes-week-14-entries-cest-10-am-june-29th-2024-this-post-includes-entry-guidlines-for-new
-@Verbal-D: Gospel Musician/Rapper/Singer/Songwriter & Official Vibes Judge
Thank you so much, well noted Sir🫡
Sending you an Ecency vote
