Hello hive, this is kingtamarah in hive weekly competition performing roses are red violets are blue, an original song created by me. I hope you'll like it.
LYRICS
Roses are red
Violets are blue
If I could sing
You'll be my voice
Roses are red
violets are blue
Girl where you stay
Would be my grave
Roses are red
violets are blue
If i could die
he'll be for you
Roses are red
Violets are blue
If I was blind
Would still be you
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Your eyes are the stars
While I'm the view
Roses are red
Violets are blue,
Your smile like the sun
It brightens my view.
Roses are red
Violets are blue
Girl I can move
So let me pursue.... You
Roses are red
Violets are blue
I can never loose
When I'm with you
THANK YOU
▶️ 3Speak
Welcome back bro ...it's nice to have your entry again ..wishing you best of luck
Thank you so much
Omo is this not Tamarah..... after a long while!!
Man, how have you been brother?
It feels so good to see you again brother.
I have been okay man, thank you so much. Feel good too
Yeah!
Where are you based now?
Ogun state, kindly message me wa.link/zkegvc
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STOPYou did a great job with your presentation. I enjoyed listening to. Keep the positivity growing 💗💗😊
Thank you ☺️
This was a pretty cool original song idea
I like the lyrics that you wrote down, they are very profound, thoughtful and poetic, the melody is pretty catchy, and your smooth singing fits this style, although starting with the same melody each phrase does get quite repetitive.
Try switching up the melody and rhythm in the middle somewhere for at least 3-4 phrases before going back into the standard melody you have built in.
This song is still a work in progress and I am sure you can build on it more layers to give it creative levels. Appreciate you sharing this one with us
Thank you, I'll keep that in mind