Vibes Web3 Music Competition 🎡🎹🎢 - Week No 12- I.C.U.

in Vibes β€’ 5 months ago (edited)

Here we are at Week No 12 already and the theme this week is Pain

My song ICU is a double edged sword -*** I see you*** but also Intensive Care Unit I.C.U

I penned this song a few years ago, pouring my soul into every lyric, and last year, it emerged as a deep house track. When I noticed this week’s theme was β€œpain,” I knew instantly that this track was the perfect fit. The lyrics resonated profoundly with the theme. I recall the intense, almost unbearable pain in my chest when I first wrote thisβ€”genuine heartbreak that seems surreal looking back now. Many of us know this agonising feeling all too well, the excruciating process of healing after losing someone or ending a relationship.

As I crafted the lyrics, I wanted to capture the essence of feeling unseen, while ironically being the one who saw this person more clearly than anyone else. Falling for them plunged me into a whirlpool of heartbreak, leaving me feeling as if I needed to be rushed to the ICU. This song is my raw expression of that pain, a melodic journey through the depths of heartache.

I hope you enjoy this rendition and look forward to your continued support and comments. Really appreciate the feedback.

Once again, I want to give thanks to @lordbutterfly and Marica for this wonderful competition and platform for fellow musicians. Thank you @verbal-d for many hours judging with Marica and adding your comments to our entries.

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@edenmichelle

This was a beautifully produced, well performed, honed,
all too real song that hit close to home
I felt those same emotions deep in my core
Into the inner marrow of my bones

My first true love, we lasted over 3 years
She got into car accident, and I naturally shed tears
But the worst part was when I visited her in the hospital, realizing slowly
That she woke up out of a mini coma, and for over 2 weeks she didn't know me

She literally forgot who I was, and that was painful and devastating
And when she finally came to, she was different, completely changing
And from then we parted ways after I saw her in the ICU
And if I could tell her anything, it would be that,
"You forgot us and my warmth, your eyes are different when I see you
This was a coldhearted break up and you've shown me the Icy You..."

Hope you enjoyed the little memory you inspired out of me

-@Verbal-D Official Vibes Judge

Thanks so much for this amazing feedback! Always appreciate you going into depth with your comments @verbal-d πŸ™πŸ» that’s extremely sad to hear and I’m sorry you went through that. Those are really beautiful lyrics you wrote there. You should turn it into something! I’m waiting to hear

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No words... This is too incredible an emotional journey. Your voice is a ticket to the angels πŸ€—.

Aww thank you so much @edwardstobia

Hey @edenmichelle loved your entry this week. You always deliver on a professional level that's for sure and I love your songs. Looking forward hearing from you in a space next week:)

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Honoured to have you comment and be here Marica! 🫢🏻 thank you for the love and kind words. Always excited to be part of Vibes and the amazing space you’ve created! Proud to know you!

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@edenmichelle this is wonderful

Thank you so much 🫢🏻

Please can I send you a private message on discord what your name is

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Winnerelo that my name

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Ohh my Eden ...big thumbs up for this piece ...it's solemn and interprete well enough ....iv played like several time ...its touching ...bless up

Thanks so much. Really appreciate this and so grateful you listened a few times 🫢🏻

This is so beautiful Eden.. oh myyy

Thank you so very much @babymoyin

Ok i quit this contest...

Haha, wow u sre amazing tbh couldnt imagine that Beauty βš‘βœŠπŸ»πŸ’ŒπŸ’Œ

Haha my fav comment ever! But please don’t quit. Grateful for your love 🫢🏻

Wow, wow , maravillosa entrada amiga 😍😍😍πŸ₯°

Muchas gracias @adrianalara

This is just beautiful πŸ₯Ή. The interpretation was just so perfect and your style of singing the song was just so relatable, I love it and I enjoyed it for everything that it was πŸ₯Ί.

I see you and intensive care unit (I. C. U), superb.

I was looking forward to reading your comment on her entry :) this song was great right? She knows the right heart strings to pull and her delivery is spot on. She has the formula for amazing music down pact

Yeah, I’ve been looking forward to her entry and I almost missed it but I’m glad I didn’t because it was just it! So nice!

She is good for real he unique voice is another amazing thing πŸ₯Ή

Thanks so much Hope. Always grateful to see your comments and have you here. Appreciate you 🫢🏻

You’re always welcome Eden πŸ₯°. It’s always a pleasure getting to listen to your presentation ❀️

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Amazing song. I'm happy to see Hive artist continue to thrive. I took a year break but now might be the best to to interact and network with skilled people. Keep it up.

Thanks so much! Hope the break was good but glad you’re back and definitely worth interacting especially with the Vibes community 🫢🏻

I`m your fan...God bless you

Thanks so much. Appreciate you!

Love this! And the scenery is not less impressive too! Such a cool song from all points of view :)

Thank you! Really appreciate this 🫢🏻 agreed. Scenery is truly special

Your lyrics are so raw and honest, it's like you're sharing a piece of your soul with us. The double meaning of 'ICU' is genius and adds depth to the already heart-wrenching lyrics. Your voice is captivating and conveys the pain and heartache so vividly.

Also, your video is always creative and lovely.

Wow girl! Thanks for this amazing feedback. Really appreciate you. πŸ™πŸ»

This is Beautiful .!!!

Appreciate that from you! Thank you

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It is a wonderful song, @edenmichelle ❀️, and I am especially grateful for the subtitles which make it easy to use at my English lessons with older students. I have shared the link with my colleague for she could also use it at her lessons. !LUV

Olga, this makes me so happy that you would help others learn with my lyrics. What an honour. Definitely will keep doing the lyrics in my videos to help 🫢🏻

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Absolutely beautiful! The lyrics and your voice are on another level πŸ₯°
Always excited to hear your entry for the week, you’re so incredibly talented Eden ❀️

Thank you ❀️ can’t wait to make more videos with you x

Very much looking forward to making videos with you again ❀️

Yes, it's lots of fun making these videos

Wow!
This is a beautiful entryπŸ™ŒπŸΎπŸ™ŒπŸΎ

Thank you so much πŸ™πŸ»

wow, this is an amazing song that I listened to. I don't even know what to say. you're so great and amazing. I love the song.

Thank you so so much! Appreciate you being here and listening πŸ™πŸ»

You're welcome mam. You are amazing

I need a terrace like yours, where I can take advantage of the natural light and especially the colors of that beautiful sky. Your performance is of a high level, emotional, sad, and magical. I congratulate you friend for such beautiful work. When you have all those resources, it is impossible not to impact others. I loved it.

You’re so right. I’m super fortunate to have this terrace at my disposal to film videos like this. And I luckily get a sunset on the one side and sunset on the other. Really appreciate your kind words. Thank you πŸ™πŸ»

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