Hi Music Lovers and Original song compare by me ❤️❤️🎶🎼
Welcome to my musical channel @bigsteff
This is my Entry for Vibes Web3 music competition week 20
My submission on X
I'm doing a lovely and simple heart felt song about our situations.
What ever situation you’re in don’t forget to call in him.
The lord is always there to heal our infirmities
Bellow are some reasons why I said we should always call on him in every situation.
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Please endeavor to read carefully 👌
In every trial, remember to call on Him. Healing and strength await! 🙏✨"**
From darkness to light, He guides our way. Choose your path wisely! 🌟 #Elohim #Adonai"**
When the healing comes, it feels like a dream. Trust in Him, for He knows our hearts. 💖"**
In the narrow way, we find true life. Let His light shine through us! 🌈 #Faith"**
Grateful for every breath, every blessing. He helps us win every battle! 🙌💫"**
I hope this song bless your soul.
I'm always full of joy that this vibes web3 music platform is where music can be expressed, enjoyed and shared. It's also encouraging and driving us for more musical creativity and Improvisations.
So, Enjoy Week 20 of the VIBES WEB3 Music competition
Remember this is a song that shows that we need to call on him💪
Lyrics
What ever situation you’re in, don’t forget to call in him.
Elohim and Adonai will heal our infirmity
When the healing comes, it will be like a dream.
I need someone to wake me up, but this is reality.
When he is by your side, he will help you win
He will also protect you from any form of calamity
What ever situation you are in don’t forget to call on him
He will Help you win
It will be like a dream
He understands us, he has empathy
He knows how we feel
Narrow is the gate and difficult is the way
That’s leads to life, and those that pass through it are but few
It is obvious that there are demonic, and Godly gathering,
It is left for you to choose your group
May the light of the Lord radiate in our lives, for it is said they will know us by our fruits.
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What ever situation you’re in, don’t forget to call in him.
Elohim and Adonai
Let’s be grateful for the things he has been do ing. Some are dead, but we are living, we are alive
When ever you see me it shows that I’m fine.
All the rolling tears on my face has been whipped away
I’m far away from demonic traps, several miles away
When temptation comes, i will run away
He will Help you win
It will be like a dream
He understands us, he has empathy
He knows how we feel
Narrow is the gate and difficult is the way
That’s leads to life, and those that pass through it are but few
It’s obvious that there are demonic and Godly gathering,
It is left for you to choose your group
May the light of the Lord radiate in our lives, for it is said they will know us by our fruits.
What ever situation you’re in, don’t forget to call in him.
Elohim and Adonai will heal our infirmity
When the healing comes, it will be like a dream.
I need someone to wake me up, but this is reality.
When he is by your side,
End.
Trust you will love it.
@bigsteff
I see and hear you are still elevating your lyricism and spiritual awareness. You have some of the most powerful and biblically sound gospel lyrics of any original gospel artist in our Vibes Community right now. You are straight to the point and hold no punches back.
Your flow is getting sharper and your writing ability is improving.
The tonality on the track still needs work, sometimes you slide out of key and need to really focus on the delivery and transition between your singing rap style.
I would say definitely work on your diction and pronounciation more to really overemphasize saying Each word correctly and also to make sure you are turning the beat down or you need to rap sing louder. The music is too loud in this entry. Turn it down 10-15% or increase the volume of your vocals 10-15% when you perform
Your rhyme schemes are also improving, I see minor changes I would make like I would switch the placement of Elohim and Adonai to actually Adonai and Elohim, in that order,
To help with the rhyme pattern you already had going like “him, Elohim, in, end, win… etc etc”
and your song structuring is getting better.
Keep improving and also one last compliment,
Your ear for music is really good when choosing the right beats for your original song. That is definitely a strong talent on your side. You know what instrumentals bring out the deepest message and make a song impactful. Great entry.
Thanks 🙏
I’m very happy to hear this. I’m always trying to get better especially when I get a correction from you.
For me this is a way of getting to the top. Thanks for your advice
Will be working with it❤️🥰❤️
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@bigsteff, you've got a gift, my friend! Your song is a beautiful reminder to hold onto hope and faith. I love how your voice conveys emotion and vulnerability. The lyrics are thought-provoking and relatable - it's like you're singing directly to our heart.
Aww 🥰 thanks so much for the uplifting comment I really appreciate
Lovely presentation ❤️... Indeed God is always there for us, to answer us whenever we need him. All the best this week✨
Thanks 🙏 ❤️
There's a lot of power in that handwriting, brother. Your spiritual conscience is very high, for truly the word saith, Call unto me, and I will answer thee, and shew thee great and mighty things, which thou knowest not. Jeremiah 33:3. And you are aware of this, may God continue to illuminate your path and your music. I wish you much success my friend. Note that it is easy for you to get a little off key and tend to go out of tune, but also note that you don't have headphones on. Something that might work is to record with headphones at a moderate volume and place the track in the video edit, that would allow you to hear yourself and the track at the same time. 😎🔥
Wow this is an uplifting comment.
I pray that the lord will also illuminate your path.
God bless you richly my friend