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RE: The Dream Monster: ENG-ESP

in Writing Club3 years ago

Hi @exceltogaming! Your story is entrancing and well written.

Omg, I feel sorry for the tailor aka dream catcher. He's gifted to catch other people's dream but the power failed him when it came to his daughter's dream. Too bad. Wish I could read more to know the end. 😃

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Hi @ladytitan I am very glad you liked the story. Oh and I'm sure the girl dies at the end considering how she slept the whole day without waking up. Also, the father's fear of going to wake her up was sort of a hint to her death.