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RE: ONE LAST TRY [ENG / ESP]

in Writing Club • 2 years ago

Hello @luckydrums, This is so beautiful 😭😭😭. It even made me cry.
I love how this ended. So finally it's a win-win for Mike.
Sometimes we face very difficult times and it seems like we should just give up but if we continue and do not give up, at the end we will achieve our goals.
The executive director judged Mike only to discover that Mike was late because he saved her son.
The lessons from the story are indeed numerous.

Do not judge
Be patient and don't give up
Life is more important than anything.

Thank you so much for sharing.
Your story just made my day.

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Wooooow! , I feel so honoured right now.
I'm happy you loved it. I like happy endings too.
Thanks for stopping by. I really appreciate it