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Thank you very much, but which parts could I refine ?

i think the line art the most. would be great if you did more practise sketches to refine that 💕

Okey, is that I draw daily drawings and I try to draw them fast but I will take into account your advice if you want to take a tour on my own and if you can give me more tips let me know that helps me a lot.

i mean, you can be fast and detailed. it just takes more practise. i would look into you. i mean. i do look around regularly anyways ^^