I would suggest moving "The Ask" section up earlier (before Things To Know and right after Proposal Payment).
If I am reading this correctly, if this vote passes the Dao will just pay 1 SPS to Peakmonsters, right? There is a lot of additional explanation and context that is provided in the post which is fine, but that makes it a little confusing regarding whether there are any additional components of the proposal that one would be voting for.