Interesting topic you brought in.
Your text need some editing, massive paragraphs not only aesthetically pleasant, they also tires the reader faster and can make them scramble the points you are making. This post is a great guide on editing.
You also used some tags wrongly, there isn't a direct metion to the tokens and/or their uses and topics. Next time would be better to search what those tags are about before using (Oneup is Blockchain gaming and CreativeCoin is for art)
Seeing that you are new here and you are putting effort in you post I will curate it. Hard work must be rewarded.
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Thank you for the constructive corrections. I've noted all that you've pointed out and I'll do the needful in my next post.
You welcome! I will be waiting to see your next one!