This is what I like to see from #Hivians.
The first 3 #HiveElevator pitches will be here soon, as we made them during HiveFest
How to your (just an idea):
A. Focus on a persona, a typ of person you like to talk to.
B. Adapt your wording to this person and don't put to much information into it.
This makes sense, very solid instruction! I will wait and de what the first three look like as well, so I can try to follow the format where applicable.
Perfect