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RE: 🎵HIVE OPEN MIC #240: "I FLY" (ORIGINAL) By @fab-tay [ENG-ESP]

in Hive Open Miclast month

It is impossible not to enjoy your participation this week my brother, you have done very well, congratulations. Your smile is the perfect invitation to spend a nice time reading and listening to your song and the lyrics of the song are perfect to enhance the idea that we want to project this week as a community.

I would still like to make a couple of suggestions, the most important is that you say it is an original song, but you are using a musical track, it would be ideal if you could share the link of that track in case you are not the one who elaborated it, remember that all the material we borrow must be credited. My other suggestion is very personal and it's up to you if you change it or not, your last videos are in vertical format, I feel that in Hive, especially in communities like this one everyone should record in horizontal, so that it is attractive both in phones and PC; it's up to you, but as a blog I feel it's more elegant as you always recorded in horizontal.

Anyway you have done a great job, thanks for sharing it in the Hive Open Mic, I send you a hug and I hope to see you soon in other communities where we always coincide...

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It's a delight to have your review and I say a big thanks as this really helped to be make the most of every opportunity and to be the best as much as possible.

It is an original song composition which is spontaneous in line with this week's theme, however as I mentioned in the post, I extracted the instrumental I used through the Moises app. I'm so sorry for not referencing the owner of the instrumental which I have now corrected in my post and it has reflected. The instrumental rhythm aligns with the composition so well and that's why I made use of it.

You are very right in the use of landscape instead of portrait in the video recording, it is unusual for me though as a result of issues with phone which I believe will be resolved soon, so I just have to make do with that.

I accept this review, both compliments and corrections with a high sense of humility and responsibility. Thanks so much. 🙏

I extracted the instrumental I used through the Moises app

Wonderful my friend, that's what it's all about, just naming Moises App in your post is enough, as many of us know how that app works. Regarding the video, it's just a suggestion that I think might work, but whatever is most comfortable for you is the priority. Thanks for the feedback! 🙏

You are most welcomed sir
I really appreciates