a tear that falls

My aunt Stephanie has recently passed away and it has been sudden and as you can imagine a very painful prosses. I wrote this poem a few days ago and I wanted to share it here I can't say it all in the poem but hope you like what I wrote.

* It came as a shock

One day you're here the next your no more

You blew us all away this time for real

when it all took a turn

Not with your delicious food

your humor at the dinner table

The beautiful fancy dresses

But with your heart that stopped beating

and your last breath

All thing that we know for sure is

You knew you were in peace that day

And that you are in a good place

With pain in our hearts we say goodbye today

Till we meet again Rest softly in peace.

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Hello dear @lynn2005 welcome to the community. We are very sorry for the loss of your aunt, we know that losing a loved one is extremely painful, however your beautiful words to her, show how much love and affection you feel for her and how much her absence hurts you.

We have noticed that you are new to hive and therefore, we invite you to read the rules of the community, one of them is to comply with a minimum of 700 words and identify in the title the feeling or emotion you are talking about.

Thank you for sharing with us this deep feeling that you are experiencing, we send you a hug from a distance.

Hii there thank you so much I do love writing poems...
I am a new member I would like to ask is it possible that you can tell me where to go so that I could go and read the rules I'll remember the rule that next time when I write something
thank you for the hug from a distance sending one back to you. Also when I do write something even if it's only a short poem should it still be 700 words.😊

She was gorgeous, sorry you lost her. Her smile speaks a gentle soul.

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