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RE: African Americans in U.S. History and Society

in #history7 years ago

With all due respect, definite slack can be cut on the execution.

However, I would encourage you to be careful when you say things like, "...due to Americans creating slavery rings where individuals with power would force African Americans into slavery." Pretty sure that's fairly factually flawed. The slave trade had literally been around for thousands of years (for example, the story of the Hebrews interacting with Egypt, the Hiksos, the Hittites to the Israelites, etc.)

I'm not here to troll you or make you feel bad, but I would definitely encourage you to site reputable sources when you make general statements like that.

Have a good one and be careful in academia :)

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Thanks for the constructive criticism! Helps me improve overall and like I said it was completed within an hour so i could not perfect each statement.