Ok, let's see. The title and the opening paragraph looked somewhat promising, so I opened and read it. Unfortunately, the text completely lacks any criticism of itself . It cannot be said to take a critical look. It's too one sided opinion text for that. Too much tunnel vision, can't recommend. Merely a weak attempt to rationalize why religious doctrines should be followed.

I learned nothing by reading it. If you seriously want to convince someone that masturbation should not be done, start with deeply understanding why people do it. The superficial understanding you show in this article is severely lacking in that department.